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SLOB 10 February 2011 Pages 1-16

Wiki Entry #1

Owen Birnbaum is mostly the main character of the story. He is a 12 year old boy who is smarter than the average boy. He missed the rank of “Genius” by one point on his I.Q test. He loves to eat Bona Fide Oreos. He was at gym class one day and the Gym teacher was named Mr. Wolly. He was the meanest teacher in the whole school. He only dislikes the un-physical kids that love to eat junk food and watch TV all day. That day they were learning how to summersaults. So during the exercises Mr. Wolly thought a perfect idea made in his little brain.

Mr. Wolly thought that if he told the physical kids the way to do it the right way, So that the unphysical kids to do it the wrong way. So Mr.Wolly called all the students and he said that they are going to do summersaults. So he let his best students go first so they all got it right. Then came the other kids, the kids failed horribly and then finally came Owen. He sat at the mat and then he followed the instructions that was a right way to do it but when he was going to do the jumping part Mr. Wolly told Owen to just jump but it would make him fall funny so he =just stood there. And that’s when Mr.Wolly get mad he got a machine from the equipment room and it made Owen get many bruises on him somehow that he sobbed hard.

I think the book is not that bad it’s just that it is getting boring but now it is getting interesting. Like Owen has a fight with the meanest teacher ever, he builds a TV that can tell the future, present and the past. So I don’t know I will have to read it more to see if the book improves or not. If it does improve I will not change the book, but if it doesn’t get good enough I might change the book.

So that was my first wiki entry and I hope I can make a second one time this time. Also if I get time to I might tell you more about what happened in the book because I didn’t put enough details in this entry. So I hope I can read a lot more so I get a better grade on my other wiki.

SLOB 8 February, 2011 Pages 16-39 Wiki Entry #2 After the accident at gym Owen went to the lunchroom and was finally happy at school again because it was lunchtime. He was ready to eat his 3 Boda Fide Oreos, until he opened his recycled lunchbox his Oreos were gone and all he saw was the little Oreo crumbs inside the lunchbox. So Owen was looking for his Oreos and he saw that the new kid Mason Ragg. Owen felt scared, because Mason Ragg transferred to this school because he went insane for Bona Fide Oreos. He choked a girl with her own necklace! He stole Oreos from a young teen and Mason got hit with a firecracker in the face. So now Mason Ragg looked liked if he was always sneering to the students. So After school, Owen was walking home with his little sister called Jeremy. Her name is Jeremy because she joined the GWAB club. GWAB is Girls Who Are Boys, Jeremy joined when she got into a fight with a boy and she won that fight. They were getting close home until Andre came with his Hollywood smile. Jeremy had such a BIG crush about Andre. She loved everything about him, the boyish charm in her opinion the smile he has and EST. Andre wanted to talk to Owen about the accident in school and how they could probably sue Mr. Wolly because of the excise machine. I think it is getting better because of Mason Ragg, I think that he is going to be a really main part of the story. So I wish I could read more because he could be a bad person like Owen’s nemesis on the book. So about Owen’s friend Izzy he is probably just has a small part in the book. I think that because it just says some stuff about himself and then it goes into a different problem. So I think izzy is just a random friend is just detail, but maybe he might be in the book more than just a small part. Also I think that Jeremy is going to be at the part where the problem starts and she is going to be in a huge problem. So I have to read more about the book to know for sure, but it will probably take a while. So I think that it is going to be more exciting later on in the book. I think that more characters are going to be in the book though I think there are more inventions that Owen makes. Also I think that one of Owen’s inventions goes wrong and turns bad. I don’t know what is going to happen, but I think that jeremy is going to quit the GWAB club and more.

Wiki Entry #3 Jorge Cabral SLOB PGS 33-56 24 February 2011   After the walk from school Owen wanted to eat some Oreos, so he took the bag thinking what would happen if his mom found out. He was done eating his Oreos and went on working on his invention called Nemesis. Owen opened his big closet full of junk, and gave a dry run (trying to turn it on) but it only showed static on the TV screen. Owen was discouraged and then he heard a knock on the apartment door it was his mother. She had bright blond hair and she was smart too, but Owen was smarter. She worked at the 911 line. She wanted to talk to Owen and he told her about mason and how he took some cookies on the kitchen. Owen didn’t want to anymore and told her if he could go to Nima his best friend/neighbor. <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> Owen reached at his destination and he softly pressed the buzzer on the apartment, but it wasn’t Nima it was a weird man opened the door as he left the building. Owen knocked on Nima’s door and his wife opened instead because Nima was on the phone. So he mouthed out in Indian language to Owen “I’m on the phone sit down” Later Nima came to Owen and said “How was school?” Owen didn’t feel good or maybe he just had a bad day. Nima noticed he was late for work (by the way he works at a stand outside a museum and sells his best snack called MoMos.) Owen went back to his apartment and his mom suggested him to take a haircut for some reason because I don’t know why maybe she wanted to kill some time and relax alone. Jeremy left mom alone, and she probably relax for a couple of minutes or maybe hours. <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> I think Owen is feeling like if he is mostly not normal or if something is happening to him. Ever since Owen went into the Gym machine and sobbed hard, new unusual thing have been happening to him like Nima being in trouble and how his Oreos are always getting eaten by someone or something. Also how Owen and his mom (by the way her name is Zelda) had a talk about how his Oreos kept disappearing and what happened in Gym. So many things are happening to Owen. Jeremy is just probably just feeling normal because the story is mostly about Owen and his inventions. As for Nima, he is just probably getting into the whole now that we know he is. <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> Finally, that was my third wiki and I hope I read more for my next wiki (Wiki #4) so I wish I could just have more time reading t home instead of in class because then there is no me for class work for the class. So I guess this the ending of my wiki #3 I write my fourth wiki. <span style="font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 8pt; line-height: 115%;"> -Jorge Cabral